Great poem
As a fellow poetry writer, with Ms, I do have a difficult time getting my
poems written. It takes
a lot of mental energy and concentration, to try to stay on task so that the idea you want to portray is released. This means, one you must stay on task the thought or meaning you wish to convey, and two make sure it's fluid, that it sounds well.
When I finished a poem, a few nights ago, I asked my wife for help.
I told her what I was trying to convey, and gave her two questions.